When reading the travelogue, what did you dislike the most?

Being the somewhat lengthy and rambling amateur project that it is, it's not surprising that Travels has a lot of issues.

• It's probably too long for its own good.
• The arrangement is very formulaic.
• The description can be purple in places.
• Destron's own opinions might come off as unwanted polemics.
• I put in some very blatant and awkward references in the Vanilla WoW chapters (though I feel pretty confident that I stopped doing it by the time I wrote about Outland).

Did any of these elements strike you as especially problematic? Or were you bothered by something not on the list?